I've written this comic awhile ago. Would love to hear how it sounds in your languages. Would be cool if you kept it as a poem, not necessarily in the same meter, but you get it.
English
On the edge I shall be standing,
Peeking through the mists unclear.
Soon a new sun will start shining
And a new world will draw near.
I will go to lengths unheard of,
Past the seas and mountains high.
And my true love will be waiting
There for me, as I come nigh.
When my journey is completed,
When at last the troubles cease,
As the world unveils its secrets
Unto me, I'll be at peace.
Soon my feet be stepping light –
When I return to homely grove.
And the bird that comes before me
Bears a message for my love.
Kveyr
Aun verthoim ie ilhåm reveth,
Itith kyr melar nekar.
Soy tallin eled 'lelareth
Eo nua håndur 'ldays låor.
Ie 'lnæm oy læurgyr nefreir,
Väe shylser eo aymärtyr.
Eo mar falareig iltrattar
Gwam ör ieir, do daym låor.
Do mar gyedhyr hås fydonwar,
Do feduir m'trakkyry fdys,
Do håndur gres nolt neneryr
Aun iem, ie 'lruthe'urem.
Soy m'regway 'lhås gegeth swel -
Do ie wardaym gaymoim.
Eo kanyr ur dayr fre ieir
Kerr seimir öm'falarer.
Poem
Re: Poem
What kind of bird?
A Weeber-Deeber?
Ozzel's Weeber-deeber (Carduelis xanthochroica fenghom)
http://4.bp.blogspot.com/-OdzeI3RQsX0/U ... 14+(5).JPG
Binn Reaux's Weeber-deeber ( Carduelis cyrrenhensis)
https://s-media-cache-ak0.pinimg.com/73 ... 78041e.jpg
A Weeber-Deeber?
Ozzel's Weeber-deeber (Carduelis xanthochroica fenghom)
http://4.bp.blogspot.com/-OdzeI3RQsX0/U ... 14+(5).JPG
Binn Reaux's Weeber-deeber ( Carduelis cyrrenhensis)
https://s-media-cache-ak0.pinimg.com/73 ... 78041e.jpg